[rosedu-general] [Techblog] request articol

[Mihnea Dobrescu-Balaur]

On Monday, 2 April 2012 at 18:07, Adrian Scoica wrote:

> > Articolul e gata [1]. Feedback please. :)
> > [1] http://rosedu.org/~techblog/site2/gdb-a-basic-workflow.html
> > 
> 
> 
> 1) "It can be run in two distinct ways:"
> 
> Suna mai bine "GDB" can be run. E prima propozitie din text si
> cititorul inca nu il asociaza pe "it" cu substantivul din titlu.
> 
> 


Daca e vorba de astfel de detalii, as adauga faptul ca nu imi pare ok "x can be run". Pt ca nu zici "x can be see", zici "x can be seen". :)


Gg, Andrei!
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